tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5766633675085995172.comments2023-06-06T10:47:12.202-04:00Poetry by Adam CommonAdam Common, Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18294782717721438633noreply@blogger.comBlogger1092125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5766633675085995172.post-89510268138122691072022-02-01T21:44:13.431-05:002022-02-01T21:44:13.431-05:00Grabbed me from the first line. Darkly humorous an...Grabbed me from the first line. Darkly humorous and original. Something about the style brings Wes Anderson to mind, in the best possible way. Admittedly, I just finished re-watching The Grand Budapest Hotel. But still. Eric P. Caillibothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15619237013251370088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5766633675085995172.post-87855580060475954292014-06-20T11:05:57.522-04:002014-06-20T11:05:57.522-04:00Dark, but appropriately so. Nice imagery of being ...Dark, but appropriately so. Nice imagery of being caught between sleep and waking.Eric P. Caillibothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15619237013251370088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5766633675085995172.post-43418167824581029392014-02-13T14:46:29.556-05:002014-02-13T14:46:29.556-05:00"the bubbling skin and the pretty leaves"..."the bubbling skin and the pretty leaves" Intense piece, of which I thoroughly enjoyed.Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14368539518339009833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5766633675085995172.post-9066594948397702112014-02-12T06:12:35.087-05:002014-02-12T06:12:35.087-05:00a veiled threat...
first cloaked in tempting harme...a veiled threat...<br />first cloaked in tempting harmelssness<br />then it comes out into the open. <br />Scary.<br /><i>our twice shared vulnerabilities.</i> great phrase.hannahttp://vertical-dash.blogspot.nl/2014/02/downfall.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5766633675085995172.post-8494253353142682182014-02-04T19:01:25.085-05:002014-02-04T19:01:25.085-05:00This comment has been hidden from the blog.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5766633675085995172.post-90682654583078413552014-01-29T19:31:42.679-05:002014-01-29T19:31:42.679-05:00Nice turn at the end, I like it ~ And I am way up...Nice turn at the end, I like it ~ And I am way up here so I know cold cold, smiles ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5766633675085995172.post-60152957456638116322014-01-29T01:18:01.679-05:002014-01-29T01:18:01.679-05:00Good to see you too. Life is great for me :D Hope ...Good to see you too. Life is great for me :D Hope the same for you.Adam Common, Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18294782717721438633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5766633675085995172.post-3388802790549934032014-01-29T01:17:16.795-05:002014-01-29T01:17:16.795-05:00I was pretty proud of that line! Thanks for the co...I was pretty proud of that line! Thanks for the comment man.Adam Common, Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18294782717721438633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5766633675085995172.post-40142098502329508122014-01-28T23:37:11.795-05:002014-01-28T23:37:11.795-05:00ugh that last part.... she warm beneath the sheets...ugh that last part.... she warm beneath the sheets and you outside... so deeply divided... i loved the snow capped nights esp. and the bleak roofs lining the street.. and hey...good to see you... hope life goes well for you adamClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5766633675085995172.post-17851230208131725052014-01-28T23:16:19.105-05:002014-01-28T23:16:19.105-05:00nice write, Adam... checked out the picture too......nice write, Adam... checked out the picture too... it made me hungry. hahh <br /><br />especially liked <br /><br />" Cold as<br />The white night,<br />Snow capped and<br /> Bleak as<br />The roofs that<br />Line our<br /> Street." because it's FREEZING COLD. 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You have captured vividly the disgust that then turns back to closeness after the storm has passed. reliving such painful memories can hopefully strengthen the relationship, as trials like this do. You've used the form to your advantage and it fits in an excellent way the vying emotions that unfold as we read it.Chazinatorhttp://metanoeticpoetics.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5766633675085995172.post-61666382697544329762012-06-15T16:33:55.493-04:002012-06-15T16:33:55.493-04:00This comment has been hidden from the blog.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5766633675085995172.post-21530733262812955682012-06-15T09:27:30.621-04:002012-06-15T09:27:30.621-04:00A fine telling of a familiar scene. Enjoyable read...A fine telling of a familiar scene. Enjoyable read.Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/06/14/panhandle-wind/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5766633675085995172.post-18231505918928332742012-06-15T06:43:58.021-04:002012-06-15T06:43:58.021-04:00really some fine touches in this adam...your descr...really some fine touches in this adam...your descriptors are great...choleric breath...work hewn fingers...silence is deadly man, for sure....you did very well...and good to see you too...feel like its been a while...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5766633675085995172.post-48315907842671459682012-06-15T01:30:54.316-04:002012-06-15T01:30:54.316-04:00You rise to the prompt. I love your expression of...You rise to the prompt. I love your expression of the form, Adam. It feels like you and I are expressing a similar sentiment. This resonated with my piece for me. That's cool.brenda whttp://undercaws.com/2012/06/14/triversen/noreply@blogger.com